So, if this was from Brandon Sanderson the rating here would be lower. But its not. Its a first book so I'll make allowances.
The story is original enough, though inspirations from other popular series can be seen if you analyse. The plot is generally engaging to get into and an enjoyable read.
The problem is punctuation errors. Needs an editor to put in the right commas and take away unneeded ones and other small grammatical/sentence structure mistakes that could be easily fixed and make it feel a little unpolished.
Overall, I'd recommend the read for fans of dystopian future books.
- フォーマット： Kindle版
- ファイルサイズ： 4054 KB
- 推定ページ数： 236 ページ
- 同時に利用できる端末数: 無制限
- 販売： Amazon Services International, Inc.
- 言語: 英語
- ASIN: B07HYBDJ98
- Text-to-Speech（テキスト読み上げ機能）: 有効
- Word Wise: 有効
- カスタマーレビュー: 評価の数 23
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